Wednesday, September 19, 2007

The first verse of the poem on page nine means that he is excited to shine each little part of his tail. Alice follows the rabbit because she is curious as to where the rabbit is going. She wants to see where it will lead her to and what she might find when it gets to where its going. It is shaped the way it is to show you in a little more detail of how the mouse is talking. How he was pausing and taking breaths a lot. He couldn't tell the story without running out of breath every other word. There is no winner or loser, no start or finish line in this race. It is just a simple race for fun.

3 comments:

Mr. Neuburger said...

Nice response. Good to have you back in class.

Hay Hay said...

I thought you did a awesome job on your post. You told all of the answers to the questions and explained how the story is going so far. Keep up the good work.

Plowboys said...

I don't understand your picture misses. What in the world is it?`